Ig the author forgot she’s supoused to be deadly sick. All of suden she can play around with not consequence when she could barely get up in the bed… and it’s suposed she become more and more sick…
It’s irritating that the author is incoherent and amateurish with a fundamental issue in the plot. Now this story will only complete the checklist of the usual clichés and become tedious.
If the author doesn’t even care about the plot, why should I?
In the beginning chapters they made sure to show that’s she’s sick but now it kind of doesn’t look like she’s an ill person even though she is.Although the story isn’t that bad right now I hope they don’t try to continue this kind of plot of her helping people.Its okay but it will get boring if it keeps going on.
blurp:3
@Djbdkvogdj I agree with you, I also would find it boring if she just keeps taking on more than she can.
Shizuku
Wait wasn’t she sick?? Now how is she allowed to go out and play
chessie
Ig the author forgot she’s supoused to be deadly sick. All of suden she can play around with not consequence when she could barely get up in the bed… and it’s suposed she become more and more sick…
It’s irritating that the author is incoherent and amateurish with a fundamental issue in the plot. Now this story will only complete the checklist of the usual clichés and become tedious.
If the author doesn’t even care about the plot, why should I?
Djbdkvogdj
In the beginning chapters they made sure to show that’s she’s sick but now it kind of doesn’t look like she’s an ill person even though she is.Although the story isn’t that bad right now I hope they don’t try to continue this kind of plot of her helping people.Its okay but it will get boring if it keeps going on.