I Thought You Were A Time-Limited Husband - Chapter 53
Comments for chapter "Chapter 53"
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EvalleB
I could not move past this sentence this entire chapter: “I’ve never done anything my whole life to avoid being involved with the imperial family.” I know what the translator meant, but this reads off as he’s never done anything in his life that doesn’t involve the imperial family in his every action, like he’s always been working for or with them. That sentence would be better as “I’ve never done anything my whole life JUST to avoid being involved with the imperial family” or “I’ve never done anything my whole life BECAUSE I WANTED avoid being involved with the imperial family” or “I’ve never done anything my whole life SO THAT I avoid being involved with the imperial family”. There were better clearer ways to write that sentence. The way the translator took is what a writer should generally avoid: ambiguous wording.
Natalia
Good, now go kill the bastard who hurt them