It’s not a case of being loved - Chapter 36

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1. EvalleB

   Another chapter of flashbacks. Great. 😑
   Did the writer forget that we are in the middle of a fight? Because I didn’t forget. I want this to be over with.
   I went back to check. This villain appeared at the end of chapter 22. The main couple didn’t meet him (together) until chapter 26, when they arrived at this inn/hotel. This fight started at the end of chapter 31.
   Normally I would have no problem with a fight scene being this long. But this has been nothing but talk and chasing the villain around! There’s no sword fight, there’s no magic fight. There’s very little action actually happening in this story!
   This is bad writing! Using flashbacks to stretch out the story and in the middle of a fight no less. Lazy, bad writing!

   June 3, 2025 at 1:09 pm

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2. Hinata316

   Awe..

   June 1, 2025 at 4:52 am

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