My Brothers Dote On Me - Chapter 174

3 Comments

1. Whyxoxo

   So many chapter with unnecessary scene. The main story about pei yun ge and her brothers in Qin Family is toooooo little, not relatable with this title.
   The storys being bored and not imppressive anymore like begin.

   November 28, 2023 at 3:22 pm

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2. Whyxoxo

   And pei yun ge was so clingy as a woman. I know she was hurt by her family before, but if she want to revenge. Did she have to live in Qin house to defend her family and kick qin yao jiao from the Qin family and make her mother aknowledge her and kick Qin Yao Jiao???

   Really the story is out of line though.

   November 28, 2023 at 3:20 pm

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3. Whyxoxo

   Somehow this story is so awkward lately, the story about pei yun ge and her brothers in Qin Family is to little.
   How about her mom? Her dad?
   Too much unnecessary story.
   And somehow some scene is not relatable.
   Ex, pei yun ge defense an enemy, but next scene is in another case with her in another scen.
   So how about previous scene (react of the enemy, or others).
   And too much story pei yun ge with huo shi du.
   Is this story pei yun ge with her brothers right? Why only pei yun ge with huo shi du almost.

   I think the writer need to develop this story to be impressive.

   November 28, 2023 at 3:17 pm

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