My Brothers Dote On Me - Chapter 4
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Emily_05011
This doesn’t make any sense.
Mika<3
Kk, I’m dropping this. It makes BARELY any sense. The emotions aren’t realistic and the only compelling part of this story is the art style. I will give credit that the artist is VERY talented, but the story should be paced slower and the characters should have more depth then that of a paper bag.
Mika<3
For those who need more on what I was saying– The brothers: all of them think “I wrong, plz forgive”
The step sister: “I evil, I hurt”
The oldest bro’s gf: “I evil gf, I jealous of little girl”
Next is the story: they gave absolutely NOTHING about the main protagonist. She’s the main character, I should AT LEAST be able to know her age. She also had the personality depth of a rock. She thinks “I die, need revenge.” She doesn’t even have a clear plan. She goes into everything blind. And all of a sudden she’s going to school? She’s gonna live there too? The guy who was in that room for being evil, the story was so unclear that idek who it was? Was it another brother? Or her mother? Or her father? An uncle or a cousin? Yea, don’t know. She’s also accepting all of the brothers at face value and doesn’t suspect them of any foul play. That doesn’t make any sense. They were evil to you in your past life so if they hurt you before, why assume they won’t in the second? See, makes no sense.
Again, this is a lot so u don’t have to read all this the TL;DR version is the first comment. Thanks for reading if you did I guess :\
apsanra
wtf with this 360˚