nah i don’t think this is too much. remember not everybody has enough experience nor awareness to sympathize with long term trauma, so i appreciate the storyboarding to show the back and forth side of it
does ot make it a slower pace? probably. does it make for a less well built story? well you’re in for a ride honey
Tooo much monologue
Tooo much unnecessary details…
You are expanding the details and events to create a slow pace
Whether to give suitable events in short chapter or create a long chapter with more events to new and different scenes
Seriously
I am the Villaine is way more accurate in doing a perfect job in making a well built story
Try to make it better author
Christarlie11
Bravo you did good 👏👏👏
nerine
nah i don’t think this is too much. remember not everybody has enough experience nor awareness to sympathize with long term trauma, so i appreciate the storyboarding to show the back and forth side of it
does ot make it a slower pace? probably. does it make for a less well built story? well you’re in for a ride honey
Amy Liddell
Tooo much monologue
Tooo much unnecessary details…
You are expanding the details and events to create a slow pace
Whether to give suitable events in short chapter or create a long chapter with more events to new and different scenes
Seriously
I am the Villaine is way more accurate in doing a perfect job in making a well built story
Try to make it better author
BabyPixel
I’m so glad she got to say her piece because a lot of people don’t get to- and it’s important! 😤
Simpin Slut
Tell him off sis 👏