The Empress’s Beast Selection - Chapter 34
MY READING HISTORY
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I’m a Worthless Stepmother, But I Love My Family Madly!
Chapter 80
February 11, 2025
Chapter 79
February 7, 2025
In The Night, At The Duke’s Mansion
Chapter 34
March 23, 2025
Flowers Are Bait
Chapter 19
March 24, 2025
The Archmage’s Restaurant
Chapter 74
March 24, 2025
Chapter 73
March 15, 2025
Solo Leveling
Chapter 200
May 31, 2023
Chapter 199
May 24, 2023
Tears on a Withered Flower
Chapter 46
March 29, 2025
Chapter 45
March 22, 2025
The Beginning After the End
Chapter 211
March 28, 2025
Chapter 210
March 21, 2025
My Beloved Oppressor
Chapter 61
March 20, 2025
GreenMint
They we’re abt to kiss 👹
EvalleB
I’m sorry but that opening was pretty bad writing.
The emperor killed a man in front of several people and the story narrative said “It was the beginning of madness” or something like that. And the BOOM! next scene we see MC saying stuff like “I’ve never been happier.” I know she doesn’t know what’s going on but that’s not my point. My point is that the story took a jarring turn and used the wrong dialogue. They should have paced it out so it won’t feel cobbled together like my cooking after a bad hangover. Putting those two (lines) so close to one another didn’t let either scene land the emotional punch the writer was probably going for. It looks messy and amateurish. How is the audience supposed to feel something if the writer(s) don’t give the TIME to feel it?
I honestly don’t know why I’m examining it. This was a waste of time. Thanks for reading this block of text anyway.