The Empress’s Beast Selection - Chapter 34
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darknezz96
@EvalleB it is actually a very good narrative style used by many authors. Its called dual narrative plot progression. It expands two independent narratives that eventually merge to form the overall plot of the story. I have actually seen a lot of it on many manhwas, mangas, and novels, both in Korea and Japan.
GreenMint
They we’re abt to kiss 👹
EvalleB
I’m sorry but that opening was pretty bad writing.
The emperor killed a man in front of several people and the story narrative said “It was the beginning of madness” or something like that. And the BOOM! next scene we see MC saying stuff like “I’ve never been happier.” I know she doesn’t know what’s going on but that’s not my point. My point is that the story took a jarring turn and used the wrong dialogue. They should have paced it out so it won’t feel cobbled together like my cooking after a bad hangover. Putting those two (lines) so close to one another didn’t let either scene land the emotional punch the writer was probably going for. It looks messy and amateurish. How is the audience supposed to feel something if the writer(s) don’t give the TIME to feel it?
I honestly don’t know why I’m examining it. This was a waste of time. Thanks for reading this block of text anyway.