The Tragedy of a Villainess - Chapter 3
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faeret2
im so confused this doesnt even feel like she switched into another world… i feel like I’m interrupting something
lologust
A lot of information that’s brought in oddly. Setting up a story is important and here I feel like I skipped chapters without knowing it.
We’re on the 3rd chapter and she’s already been here for 1 year, whereas in the previous chapter I had the impression she’d just arrived in this world.
Furthermore, there’s been no proper introduction of any of the characters except : he’s my fiancé but he’s going to cheat on me, he’s the idiot who’s going to marry the saint (besides, I thought the fiancé was the real ML), she’s the seamstress but she gets fired 2 seconds after she appears, he’s my killer bodyguard and she’s the FL a saint from another world, etc….
Anyway… It’s a bit of a messy start. I know a lot of readers often complain that the plot drags on, but this is a sprint!
I hope the next chapters won’t be like this: there’s a difference between taking the time to set up a story and going too fast for the sake of it.
Fulliy
I think the plot twist is that bitch aka saint gonna be the real villainess
GhostlyQueen
Forget the Saint and her so-called fiancé! I like the Silver-haired guy more anyway 😤
Unholy_Bitches
She ain’t no saint. She’s literally a bitch.
Borg709
Another b*tch saint.haizz.trash!
atrinfdls
Clearly they skipped a lot of parts. The phase is a bit off
sofiav.
I’m a little bit confused with the story!
Katezchenn
Ugh hate the “saint” already
WorldCrosser
She is just unlikable