From Duty to Devotion

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1. MidMist

   I tried reading further but with the story itself slowly degrading on top of the poor facial anatomy that is already a pet peeve of mine, I just can’t finish reading this one.
   I thought it had potential and I was hoping that maybe this one might improve the art quality over time only to be met with disappointment.
   I do enjoy leading characters that have scars or other physical “flaws” as it can really open up a lot of possibilities with character development and personality, making them less likely to be a character with a flat personality.
   The thought process of the character is very flat and flawed, it initially looked like she was going to develop into a real great character but it slowly eroded with foolish decisions one after another and she was only spared/recovered from incidents through convenient everything worked out regardless moments.
   Several characters have inconsistent personalities and actions that don’t really line up correctly. Stupid actions are done by multiple characters and some even have the way they respond made purely for the convenance of the female lead who has a shallow personality at best and a faulty sense of reality that is again purely to push the plot whichever way the author wants without realistic reasoning.
   This story is decent at best, I can’t call it good and it is nowhere near being great, as for the art the facial anatomy is bad and size proportions of characters and the background had frequent issues from certain things being too big or small in comparison to the surrounding and or characters, the depth perception was awful in multiple scenes as well.
   I’m not sure what else I should say here, I guess it’s best to wrap it up as a disappointment.

   October 21, 2023 at 8:34 pm

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2. IhatetrashML

   The female lead is utterly pathetic & pitful.. she of course needs the male lead to save her it’s a painful read I can’t finish this

   August 13, 2023 at 1:39 pm

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